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***The line graph shows the proportion of population in Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia residing in urban areas between 1970 and 2020 along with the projections for 2030-2040.

Overall, the population rate of all given countries steadily rose over the whole period with cities of Philippines being the most populous, while Indonesia ones maintained the position of being the least populated.

In 1970, Malaysia and the Philippine cities had comparable demographic rates, each hovering around 30%. This pattern persisted until 1990, with both nations experiencing a steady increase to approximately 50%. However, starting from that juncture, Malaysia is anticipated to undergo a gradual rise to 80% by 2030, while the Philippines is expected to decline to around 52% in the same year.

When considering other nations' urban areas, such as Indonesia and Thailand, the percentage of city dwellers in these countries stood at approximately 15-18% respectively. Both countries exhibited a similar upward trajectory, reaching around 30% by the 2000s. Despite commencing with akin proportions, Indonesia witnessed a rapid surge in population rates from 2000 onwards, with projections indicating a rise to 60% by 2040. In contrast, Thailand experienced a notably slower growth, bringing its estimate to approximately 48%.

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