Yea, it's been really tough for me since last Monday, when our last semester started. Handling both studies and work, even though they are one after another, is smashing me both physically and mentally.

Anyways, this is life. Half of this hardship will end soon, hopefully! I hate the university))

O'quvchilarimga o'z sample essayimni yozib berishim kerakligini his qilib uxlamadim. Ularga yangicha yozishni o'rgatgandim.

35 minutda yozilgan essay - 5 minut refined)

I believe it deserves something around 7.5

In the second file, I have removed the spelling mistakes, improved punctuation and added sentences in certain essays (either examples or supporting ideas - highlighted in bold); enjoy comparing the two files to see how little adjustments can have an impact on the overall quality of the essay ✔️

These files are related to this lesson ?

#attentiontodetail ⚡️

@ieltsaidbydilshodbek ?

Kanal linki juda oddiy?

https://t.me/di_yorbeksblog

Daa, ancha ko'payib qolibmiz. Kanalimizni dalshe tarqatamiz okala, yana ko'payaveraylik, yaqinda nasib WRITING bo'yicha zòr narsala qilamiz InshaAlloh.