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#writing #mysample In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a house with friends. Is this a positive or a negative development? Today, it is…

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***In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a house with friends.

Is this a positive or a negative development?**

Today, it is becoming increasingly common for young people to start their independent life by moving out of their parents’ house after school graduation. I believe this trend is largely positive, offering numerous benefits for both the young adults and their parents.

One of the main advantages of moving out early is the opportunity it provides for young people to gain essential life skills. Living independently requires them to manage responsibilities, such as budgeting, cooking, and time management, which are crucial for personal development. These experiences foster greater resilience and adaptability, preparing them for the challenges of adult life. Additionally, this independence often brings a sense of freedom, which can boost young adults’ confidence, encouraging them to set personal goals and take control of their own lives. While the transition can be challenging, it serves as a necessary step towards maturity.

Another benefit is the positive impact on the relationship between young adults and their parents. When they no longer live under the same roof, conflicts due to lifestyle differences and parental control tend to decrease, leading to a healthier, more respectful relationship. This separation can be particularly beneficial for parents who may find it refreshing to regain their privacy and focus on their own pursuits. This is especially true for those experiencing a mid-life crisis. For example, parents who no longer have daily responsibilities related to their children may have more time to rediscover hobbies, connect with friends or travel. This shift can develop a renewed sense of purpose and independence for parents as well.

In conclusion, the decision of young people to live independently after finishing school is a positive development. It not only allows them to grow personally and develop essential life skills, but it also provides their parents with an opportunity to embrace a new chapter in life.*

4️⃣3️⃣Hello. I am just starting my career as an ielts instructor. My point is:

For the decent score in Task 2, for 7-7.5, vocabulary range is not that important, but being mistake-free in grammar and vocabulary. I advice students avoid using fancy vocabulary and too complex structures. What I think is even articles consist of 80% A2-B1 words. So just use topic-related vocabulary, no need for words such as mediocre or manifest.

Yes, fixing the existing issues in LR and GRA is the right way to start. If you make too many mistakes, there is no point in showing a great range. It doesn't have to be perfect, but the majority of sentences must be error-free.

4️⃣2️⃣Assalomu alaykum teacher.

I have a serious problem with spelling in my writing. It may sound ridiculous, but it's getting irritating because an excessive number of mistakes is affecting almost all sections in writing. Is there any effective training for this?

Use a notepad instead of Microsoft Word. Train your eyes to notice spelling mistakes.

4️⃣1️⃣Assalom aleykum, you mentioned in one of your answers that reading helped you a lot to improve your writing. May I ask what do you usually read? Is it a topic specific material that you find helpful reading or just books on general topics ?
I am stuck at 7 and want to improve my task 1 ( as it is 6-6.5)
Do you think reading others’ samples would help me with that as well?
Thank you teacher in advance!

I read IELTS Passages. I read them in classroom with my students when analysing Ielts reading materials

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Assalomu aleykum va rahmatulloh barakotuh, ustoz written task 2 uchun ChatGpt qòyin beradigan band score qanchalik ishonchli ?? , oldindan raxmat uztoz.

Ishonchli emas. Baxo berolmaydi u. Xar qanaqa promptla qib korganman man, baribir yaqin bersaham, adashadi bazida.

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How to write supportive statements to topic sentence precisely and how I do brainstorming about supporting statements

The job of your supporting sentences is to clarify and exemplify your points. So, basically it is a way to explain what you mean by digging deeper and deeper into the topic. You can ask yourself "why?" "how?" and begin with something as simple as Cause & Effect relationship. There is a separate chapter in Pauline Cullen's book.

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Assalomu alaykum. Thank you for answering our questions.

My question: how do i make my writing more natural. When i write essays, even though my sentences are grammatically correct, people say they are not natural and smooth. I am stuck at 7-8 in task 2 for this reason i guess. What should i focus on?

The Final Boss of Lexical Resource criterion is using words naturally. That's the difference between 8.0 and 9.0 oftentimes. So, the only way to fix this is to use only what you are sure about. If you wanna write something during the exam, but don't know the right Adjective, or Verb for it, say it differently or avoid it altogether. However, during your prep, you can always rely on Chatgpt for help. Just ask for collocations or more natural ways to say something.

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