#writingnotes ✍️

What's wrong with the following phrase?

-A free gift

The person who finds it right will get a chance to have speaking wiz me

#phrase

Dress down - wear clothes (to work) that are not smart, e.g. old jeans.

- On Saturdays, everyone dresses down at work.

#pov

Them: How are you?

Me: I am one subscriber away from good ?‍?️

Article of the day ?

New Scientist

Should everyone start eating snakes to save the planet?

Pythons convert food into meat more efficiently than other livestock, and they can be fed on waste meat, but this doesn't mean snake meat is inherently more sustainable

Odamlar ajoyib-da..

Today, I checked around 30 essays and fitfillionta reports. For each essay, I normally spend 10-15 minutes checking, giving feedback and some suggestions to improve..

One guy, after getting perfectly checked two of his essays, is texting me back:

Teacher, can you also check this one essay?

Me: ?

Writing advice!

- Don't start a sentence with and and because. Learn how to use cohesion effectively.

- Study passive voice [learn when and why we use passive]

- Countable and Uncountable nouns [learn why you shouldn't say fast foods]

- Articles [learn why we use the definite article]

- Proof read your essays before sending them for evaluation [some of your essays are as ugly as hell]

My friend, Jasur IELTS 8.0, started a new challenge.

Go and check him out. They are analyzing authentic materials ?

You miss 100% of the shots you don’t take.

— Wayne Gretzky

The table shows how the number of cars produced in three countries changed* between 2003 and 2009.

In general, the number of cars produced in Argentina and Thailand increased, while the reverse was true for Australia. Moreover, Thailand had consistently higher figures, despite a significant decline in the final year.

Body 1: Increases [Argentina & Thailand]
Focusing on the countries which increased their car sales. Thailand stood out among other countries, with 735.825 cars in 2003, while Argentina produced only 235,088 cars. Three years later, there were significant increases in the number of cars made in both countries, with the former producing 1,162,356 cars, whereas the figure for the latter increased to 352,759. In the last year, Thailand saw a slight decline, but remained as the largest car producer, with 999,963 cars. Unlike this, the figure for Argentina concluded the year with another increase to 466,089 cars.

Body 2: Decreases [Australia]
On the other hand, Australia showed a completely opposite trend. The figures for this country decreased gradually from 452,163 cars in 2003 to 341,268 cars in 2006. After another decline, they closed the year with 245,264 cars.*

- 185 words.

#classwork?‍?

Results ?****

Malika - Overall 7.0 | Speaking 8.0 ?️
Jasurbek- Overall 8.0 | Writing 7.0 ✍️
Munisa - CEFR B2 | Speaking 58 ?️
Dilafruz - Overall 6.0 | Writing 6.0 ✍️
Dunyo - Overall 6.0 | Writing 6.0 ✍️
Laylo - Overall 5.5 | Writing 5.5 ✍️
Sarvinoz - Overall 5.5 | Writing 6.0 ✍️
Bahrom - Overall 6.0 | Speaking 6.5 ?️
Jasurbek - Overall 7.5 | Writing 7.0 ✍️
Diyorbek - Overall 7.0 | Writing 6.5 ✍️
Malika - Overall 6.0 | Speaking 6.5 ?️
Dilnura - Overall 7.5 | Writing 7.5 ✍️
Husrav - CEFR B2 | Speaking 60 ?️
Abdulaziz - Overall 6.0 | Writing 6.0 ✍️
Yusuf - Overall 8.5 | Speaking 8.5 *?️***