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***🔖*** **Why Short Stories Are Best …

🔖 Why Short Stories Are Best for English Learning?

You get more time to focus on individual words. When a text is short, you can devote more time to learning how every single word is used and what importance it has in the piece.

You can read a whole story in one sitting. Attention spans are very important for learning, and the ability to finish a story gives you more time to digest it. Short stories are designed to give you maximum information with minimal effort.

It is best for consistency. It is far easier to read one story every day than trying to read a big novel that never seems to end.

You can share them easily in a group. Since short stories can be read in a single setting, they are ideal for book clubs and learning circles. Most of the time these groups do not work because members have no time to read. Short stories are the perfect solution.

You can focus more on ideas and concepts. Language is less about words and more about the meaning behind them. If you spend all your time learning vocabulary and grammar, you will never be able to fluently speak a language because you will have little to talk about. These short stories give you the opportunity to understand big ideas in context.

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***🔖*****Do not rush to finish your …

🔖Do not rush to finish your essay

After writing your conclusion, you might think that you have completed your essay. Wrong. Before you consider this a finished work, you must pay attention to all the small details.

Check the order of your paragraphs. Your strongest points should be the first and last paragraphs within the body, with the others falling in the middle. Also, make sure that your paragraph order makes sense. If your essay is describing a process, such as how to make a great chocolate cake, make sure that your paragraphs fall in the correct order.

Review the instructions for your essay, and review what you have written. Reread your paper and check to see if it makes sense. Make sure that sentence flow is smooth and add phrases to help connect thoughts or ideas. Check your essay for grammar and spelling mistakes.

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*⭐️ *Map of The Model Essays

🖥 Essay 1 - 10 🖥 Essay 11 - 20

📌 Essay 21: Column chart - The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the Internet everyday from 2003-2006.

📌 Essay 22: As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people travelling, there is a growing demand for more flights. What problems does this have for the environment? What measures could be taken to solve the problems?

📌 Essay 23: Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their families. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments on both sides, and say which side you personally support.

📌 Essay 24: A rise in the standard of living in a country seems to only benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems might this difference cause? How might the problems be reduced?

📌 Essay 25: Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

📌 Essay 26: Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what ef ects does this have on animal life and human society?

📌 Essay 27: Column chart - The chart below shows the percentage of whole world population in four countries from 1950 to 2000, with projections till 2050.

📌 Essay 28: In many countries household waste e.g. food packaging is increasing day by day. What are the reasons? How can this problem be solved?

📌 Essay 29: New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

📌 Essay 30: Some people believe government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

⚠️ P.S: To be continued ...

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*⭐️ *Map of The Model Essays

🖥 Essay 1 - 10

📌 Essay 11: Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

📌 Essay 12: Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

📌 Essay 13: Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed. However, others think that zoos are useful for protecting rare animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

📌 Essay 14: Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative development?

📌 Essay 15: The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken legally. What are the advantages and disadvantages of learning one language in the world?

📌 Essay 16: Some employers of their employees subsidised membership of gyms and sports clubs, believing that this will make their staf healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so.

📌 Essay 17: With a growing world population, one of the most pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

📌 Essay 18: Some people support developments in agriculture such as factory farming and the scientific creation of new types of fruits and vegetables. Others oppose this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

📌 Essay 19: ‘The Internet will never replace traditional course books in schools.’ How far do you agree with this prediction?

📌 Essay 20: Some people say that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others think individual circumstances and motivation should be given consideration. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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*⭐️ *Map of The Model Essays

📌 Essay 1: Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

📌 Essay 2: Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed. However, others think that zoos are useful for protecting rare animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

📌 Essay 3: Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative development?

📌 Essay 4: Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?

📌 Essay 5: All education and healthcare should be funded by government and free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

📌 Essay 6: Obesity is now a major global epidemic. What can be done to tackle this increasingly common problem?

📌 Essay 7: Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

📌 Essay 8: In many societies in the world, the population is ageing rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare. A nation’s population should pay for their healthcare provision in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

📌 Essay 9: Companies are responsible only for making money for their investors. Therefore, they should not be held accountable for the environmental and social costs of their business activity to society as a whole. Businesses should do no more than concentrate on making profit. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

📌 Essay 10: Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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​​*📝 A Short Story on Self Confidence*

There was a business executive who was deep in debt and could see no way out.

Creditors were closing in on him. Suppliers were demanding payment. He sat on the park bench, head in hands, wondering if anything could save his company from bankruptcy.

Suddenly an old man appeared before him. “I can see that something is troubling you,” he said.

After listening to the executive’s woes, the old man said, “I believe I can help you.”

He asked the man his name, wrote out a check, and pushed it into his hand saying, “Take this money. Meet me here exactly one year from today, and you can pay me back at that time.”

Then he turned and disappeared as quickly as he had come.

The business executive saw in his hand a check for $500,000, signed by John D. Rockefeller, then one of the richest men in the world!

“I can erase my money worries in an instant!” he realized. But instead, the executive decided to put the uncashed check in his safe. Just knowing it was there might give him the strength to work out a way to save his business, he thought.

With renewed optimism, he negotiated better deals and extended terms of payment. He closed several big sales. Within a few months, he was out of debt and making money once again.

Exactly one year later, he returned to the park with the uncashed check. At the agreed-upon time, the old man appeared. But just as the executive was about to hand back the check and share his success story, a nurse came running up and grabbed the old man.

“I’m so glad I caught him!” she cried. “I hope he hasn’t been bothering you. He’s always escaping from the rest home and telling people he’s John D. Rockefeller.”

And she led the old man away by the arm.

The astonished executive just stood there, stunned. All year long he’d been wheeling and dealing, buying and selling, convinced he had half a million dollars behind him.

Suddenly, he realized that it wasn’t the money, real or imagined, that had turned his life around. It was his newfound self-confidence that gave him the power to achieve anything he went after.

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