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? Essay 1 - 10 ? Essay 11 - 20
? Essay 21 - 30 ? Essay 31 - 40
? Essay 41 - 50 ? Essay 51 - 60
? Essay 61 - 70 ? Essay 71 - 80
? Essay 81 - 90

?Essay 91: In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

? Essay 92: Whoever controls the media also controls the opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little that can be done to rectify this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

?Essay 93: Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?

? Essay 94: Some students prefer to take a gap year between high school and university, to work or to travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

? Essay 95: Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. However, others believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

? Essay 96: Scientists and the news media are presenting ever more evidence of climate change. Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of individuals to change their lifestyle to prevent further damage. What are your views?

? Essay 97: Fewer people are reading books these days. Therefore we should close all libraries and use the funds for something more urgent like healthcare. Do you agree or disagree?

? Essay 98: Some people believe that passports are essential as a way of regulating the population of countries. Others believe they should be abolished and we should be able to travel where we like. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

? Essay 99: Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of the waste?

? Essay 100: Smoking can cause serious illnesses and should be made illegal. To what extent do you agree?

? Task 1: The line graph compares the proportion of female members of parliaments in five European countries from 2000 to 2012.

? Task 1: The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

? Task 1: LINE CHART: The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.(below picture)

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*⭐️ *Map of The Model Essays

? Essay 1 - 10 ? Essay 11 - 20
? Essay 21 - 30 ? Essay 31 - 40
? Essay 41 - 50 ? Essay 51 - 60
? Essay 61 - 70 ? Essay 71 - 80

?Essay 81: As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?

? Essay 82: More and more families have computers in their homes. What advantages and disadvantages do home computers have for children? Should parents restrict the amount of time their children spend using the computer?

?Essay 83: Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?

? Essay 84: In many countries, an increase in life expectancy means people work until they get older to pay for their retirement. An alternative is to work at a young age. Is this a positive or negative development?

? Essay 85: Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

? Essay 86: Some people think everyone should be a vegetarian, because we do not need to eat meat to stay healthy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

? Essay 87: It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

? Essay 88: Table - Poverty proportion in Australia

? Essay 89: Nowadays many people have access to computers on a regular basis, and a large number of children play computer games. What are the negative impacts of playing computer games, and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?

? Essay 90: Some people think that schools should reward students who have the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show progress. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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*▶️ *IELTS ACADEMIC TASK 1

Task 1 question requires you to use several vocabularies to present the data given in a pie/ bar/ line/ mixed graph or to describe a process or a flow chart.

The examiner will use four criteria to score your response: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, lexical resource, & grammatical range and accuracy.

Since lexical resource will determine 25% of your score in Task 1, you have to enrich your vocabulary to hit a high band score. To demonstrate that you have a great lexical resource, you need to:

— Use correct synonyms in your writing;
— Use a range of vocabulary;
— Do not repeat words and phrases from the exam question unless there is no alternative;
— Use less common vocabulary;
— Do not use the same word more than once/twice;
— Use precise and accurate words in a sentence.

It is advisable that you learn synonyms and use them accurately in your writing in order to give an impression that you can use a good range of vocabulary.

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? IELTS Vocabulary: good essay phrases

Let's review the good vocabulary. It is full of 'less common' collocations and phrases.

? with broad implications for
? may have its dangers
? the negative implications
? the cloning of humans
? genetically modified crops
? damage whole ecosystems
? foods become resistant to
? natural predators
? humans could be modified or cloned
? provide body part replacements
? would be unprecedented
? a more optimistic prediction
? mitigate the risks
? genetic technologies
? famine in developing countries
? can be grown in harsh conditions
? from a medical perspective
? produce vaccines
? cure diseases
? to correct a genetic defect
? if properly regulated
? the cloning of individual organs
? for transplant purposes
? have a positive impact on our lives
? people's fears will be unwarranted

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*⭐️ *Map of The Model Essays

? Essay 1 - 10 ? Essay 11 - 20
? Essay 21 - 30 ? Essay 31 - 40
? Essay 41 - 50

? Essay 51: Graph

? Essay 52: The land for parks is wasted and should be used for other purposes. Do you agree or disagree?

?Essay 53: Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other kinds of aid could be provided?

? Essay 55: Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?

? Essay 56: As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?

? Essay 57: Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

? Essay 58: Process

? Essay 59: Modern buildings change the character and appearance of towns and cities. The government should insist that new buildings be built in traditional styles to protect cultural identity. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

? Essay 60: In some countries, people who commit less serious crimes are made to undertake community service instead of a prison sentence. Some people believe that all people who have committed a crime should be sent to prison. Do you agree or disagree?

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? Why Short Stories Are Best for English Learning?

You get more time to focus on individual words. When a text is short, you can devote more time to learning how every single word is used and what importance it has in the piece.

You can read a whole story in one sitting. Attention spans are very important for learning, and the ability to finish a story gives you more time to digest it. Short stories are designed to give you maximum information with minimal effort.

It is best for consistency. It is far easier to read one story every day than trying to read a big novel that never seems to end.

You can share them easily in a group. Since short stories can be read in a single setting, they are ideal for book clubs and learning circles. Most of the time these groups do not work because members have no time to read. Short stories are the perfect solution.

You can focus more on ideas and concepts. Language is less about words and more about the meaning behind them. If you spend all your time learning vocabulary and grammar, you will never be able to fluently speak a language because you will have little to talk about. These short stories give you the opportunity to understand big ideas in context.

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?Do not rush to finish your essay

After writing your conclusion, you might think that you have completed your essay. Wrong. Before you consider this a finished work, you must pay attention to all the small details.

Check the order of your paragraphs. Your strongest points should be the first and last paragraphs within the body, with the others falling in the middle. Also, make sure that your paragraph order makes sense. If your essay is describing a process, such as how to make a great chocolate cake, make sure that your paragraphs fall in the correct order.

Review the instructions for your essay, and review what you have written. Reread your paper and check to see if it makes sense. Make sure that sentence flow is smooth and add phrases to help connect thoughts or ideas. Check your essay for grammar and spelling mistakes.

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*⭐️ *Map of The Model Essays

? Essay 1 - 10 ? Essay 11 - 20

? Essay 21: Column chart - The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the Internet everyday from 2003-2006.

? Essay 22: As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people travelling, there is a growing demand for more flights. What problems does this have for the environment? What measures could be taken to solve the problems?

? Essay 23: Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their families. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments on both sides, and say which side you personally support.

? Essay 24: A rise in the standard of living in a country seems to only benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems might this difference cause? How might the problems be reduced?

? Essay 25: Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

? Essay 26: Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what ef ects does this have on animal life and human society?

? Essay 27: Column chart - The chart below shows the percentage of whole world population in four countries from 1950 to 2000, with projections till 2050.

? Essay 28: In many countries household waste e.g. food packaging is increasing day by day. What are the reasons? How can this problem be solved?

? Essay 29: New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

? Essay 30: Some people believe government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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